Wednesday 5 December 2018

Descriptive Writing

This is my descriptive writing we have been doing lots and this is my class and this is my favourite.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Cody!

    My name is Ellee and I am a commentor for the Summer Learning Journey!
    I hope you have had a great Christmas and New Years?

    I really enjoyed reading your descriptive writing, it sounds like you have put a lot of effort into it and it shows!
    I like part where you said the coral reef was like stag antlers - that's such a good description, I can picture the coral easily in my mind.
    Did you choose this picture to write about?

    If you'd like to keep posting on your blog for the rest of the summer you can check out the Summer Learning Journey activities here:

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    If you have any questions feel free to post them in a comment - I hope we see you back blogging with us soon Cody!

    Ellee :)

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful comment.