Descriptive Writing

This is my descriptive writing we have been doing lots and this is my class and this is my favourite.

Book report

I liked how she saved the fifteen year old from drowning when he drove into the lake. I did not like the fifteen year old boy speeding.

ART

I liked painting because you got dirty but not to dirty. I did not like the gluing because I got really dirty.

Descriptive writing

My biggest area I improved on was putting lots of descriptive words in because I do not normally get that many in.

I am most proud of getting lots of sentences done because I have never got that many sentences done in descriptive writing.

I would like to improve on getting longer sentences because mine are pretty small.

Hunter and Sam

My biggest area I improved on was making my picture in pixel editor because it was really hard. I am most proud of finding animal prints on pixel editor. I would like to improve on getting more writing done because I did not get much done.

Reading

My biggest area I improved on was making shapes for my picture


I am most proud of doing my picture were the water was trickling down the side of the mountain.  I would like to improve on making my sentences bigger.

Word Problems

My biggest area I improved on was going back and doing it properly.
I am most proud of being able to do it so fast when I first found out how to do it.
I would like to improve on knowing what to do and the teacher not having to tell me.

How to Make Beer

My biggest area I improved on was making a imovie. I am most proud of going to the brewery.

Animal report writing

My biggest area I improved on was doing my conclusion. I am most proud of finishing my writing.

The sun

My biggest area I improved on was getting the Solar Flares picture in my slide. I am most proud of not giving up on the Solar Flares picture.

Anti Bullying Week

My biggest area I improved on is drawing on pixel editor. I am most proud of putting the pictures in. I would like to improve on getting my pictures neater.

Magic Number

I would like to improve on getting no help. I am most proud of getting it done. My biggest area I improved on was getting it right.

Reading DLO

I am most proud of getting it done because it felt good. I would like to improve on getting it done faster. My biggest area I improved on was learning what visualising was.

Lines of Symmetry

We were learning about symmetry. I am most proud of getting it done because it felt really good. I would like to improve on getting it done faster because I wasn't really fast.