Kia ora Cody, You have done a fantastic job writing this short story ‘Buster the Boxer’! I see you have included multiple different language features such as similes and some rhyme, and am so impressed with the amount of detail you have incorporated into your writing. My favourite simile that you used was ‘the dog ran out as fast as lightning’. What was your favourite simile? You mentioned how a badger, porcupine and squirrel started jumping on the trampoline. How high could they jump? You also mentioned how Buster was sad at the window. What was he sad about? It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know! Will you be writing any more of this story? Keep up the great work! Nga mihi
Kia ora Cody,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a fantastic job writing this short story ‘Buster the Boxer’!
I see you have included multiple different language features such as similes and some rhyme, and am so impressed with the amount of detail you have incorporated into your writing.
My favourite simile that you used was ‘the dog ran out as fast as lightning’. What was your favourite simile?
You mentioned how a badger, porcupine and squirrel started jumping on the trampoline. How high could they jump?
You also mentioned how Buster was sad at the window. What was he sad about?
It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know!
Will you be writing any more of this story?
Keep up the great work!
Nga mihi
he was sad because he could not go on the trampoline. The squirrel could jump really high.
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